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An Angel's Arms


No more tears. No more
fears. I offer you love and
safety in my arms.
This is for all of you out there. I am here, and my arms will be your Safe Haven, because there really is somewhat out there that truly cares. Me. :heart:


I am entering this piece in :iconmy-soul-bleeds-ink: contest

Contest is for English Haiku - [link]

Prompt - Safe Haven
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:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011  Professional Writer
Good luck with the contest :heart:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you very much :heart: :huggle:
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:iconhikaru-riku:
hikaru-riku Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Student General Artist
through these times an Angel is needed and that is you :huggle: :rose:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Professional Writer
Aww thank you sweetie :huggle: :heart:
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:iconhikaru-riku:
hikaru-riku Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Student General Artist
you're welcome :heart:
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:icontirramirr:
Tirramirr Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Also very well written =)
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you very much :)
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:icontirramirr:
Tirramirr Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
=)
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:iconchristabellelamort:
ChristabelleLAmort Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011   Digital Artist
Beautiful soft and touching words!
Good luck :)
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you so much sweetie :huggle:
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:iconchryssalis:
chryssalis Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
Beautiful words!!!I'd love that!!!:love:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you, and you do have it.
You have me :love: :heart: :smooch:
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:iconmerlinthegrey:
merlinthegrey Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Student Artist
it's the only place i can sleep in peace, with an angel i wouldn't feel bad.
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Professional Writer
I am there always. :)
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:iconmerlinthegrey:
merlinthegrey Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Student Artist
thank you ((:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Professional Writer
You are welcome sweetie :huggle: :heart:
Like I have told you; you are never alone.
Not while I am here.
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:iconmerlinthegrey:
merlinthegrey Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Student Artist
yay :tighthug:

you're my little angel ((:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Professional Writer
Most definitely, and I will always be around for you :huggle: :heart:
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:iconmerlinthegrey:
merlinthegrey Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Student Artist
then i want sleep in peace in your arms :tighthug: :heart:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Professional Writer
Then close your eyes,
And feel an angels arms,
And rest..:huggle:
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:iconmagicaljoey:
MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011   Writer
Nice work. Watch your syllables though; L1 only has 4 and L3 has 6. Both should have 5 :)
I love the theme!
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Professional Writer
I shall fix, and thank you.
I really enjoyed doing it. :)
I will let you know when I fix it, so you can tell me what you think. :)
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:iconmagicaljoey:
MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011   Writer
Np. :)
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Professional Writer
Here are the changes I made.

No more tears. No more
fears. I offer you love and
safety in my arms.
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:iconmagicaljoey:
MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011   Writer
That fits the syllable count and doesn't detract from your meaning. Nice work :D
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you very much :)
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:icon007balel:
007Balel Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Student Writer
Great work, I agree with benny.
good luck :)
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you very much :)
Same to you :D
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:icon007balel:
007Balel Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Student Writer
You're welcome :)
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:iconartbennyrgrau:
ArtBennyRGrau Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Professional General Artist
Short and to the point, very good :)
it's something few understand. You cant get love if you arent willing to be hurt, cuz when you open yor heart you get vulnerable, but that makes you strong on the long run. :)
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Professional Writer
Very true. I am glad you liked it :)
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:iconpatrick2011:
Patrick2011 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
very tender n beautiful words my friend :glomp::hug:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you sweetie :huggle: :heart:
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