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You think you’re slick
You think you’re sly
But I just caught you in a fucking lie
Yes I know you will say to me
You did it as well
And yes it maybe true
But not only did you lie
You violated me to.

How could you go through my personal things!
My private belongings, those are dear and apart of me
How dare you rape me in such away!
Did you find what you seek?
Did it put your mind at ease?
Or did it cause for more suspicion and misery?

Yet I am not surprised you went that far
Nothing will shock me about you thus far
I live in a prison, with no way out
You are the warden making my life hell
Monitoring my calls and watching whom I write
All you are causing me to do is want to fight

You put on an act of wanting things better
Walking around humble and concerned
Wanting to fix something that is already dead
Then you pull shit like this,
You need to wake up and stop acting like a little bitch!

How did you think I would feel?
Damn you are no better than my ex who did the same shit
You knew how I felt when he did it to me.
The anger, frustration and betrayal that was inside me
So why would try to do the same fucking thing?
Are you trying to show me that all men are the same?

To me what you did is a statement in itself
Well baby doing things like this won’t help
For the trust I may have had, has disappeared
Destroyed by your antics and your fears
The respect I had for you is no more,
At this point to me it is time to close this door.
Because the love I had for you is completely gone.
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Doing some venting here, forgive the profanity, but right now this is how I feel.

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:iconrockerlane1110:
I really like this. Seems like every stanza has its own rhythm and I don't mind the profanity. It shows more the emotion in it.

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"My skin is singed but it heals my heart and with glowing pride I'll wear my scars."
~AFI "Malleus Maleficarum"
:icondarlingangel0565:
I wrote it while my emotions where all over the place. Thank you:rose:
:iconnidhi-rathish:
I agree with rockerlane the profanity shows more emotion in it - you just can't have a relationship when there is no trust... I hope you're feeling better dear :hug:

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"Color in a picture is like enthusiasm in life." - Vincent van Gogh


Commission info: [link]
:icondarlingangel0565:
Thank you, I will get there, working on a new piece as we speak.:rose:
Thanks for your concern:hug:
:iconnidhi-rathish:
Can't wait to read it hun :heart:

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"Color in a picture is like enthusiasm in life." - Vincent van Gogh


Commission info: [link]
:icondarlingangel0565:
Thank you, i will putting up the picture of my cat today^^
:iconnidhi-rathish:
:w00t:

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"Color in a picture is like enthusiasm in life." - Vincent van Gogh


Commission info: [link]
:iconrockerlane1110:
You're welcome.

--
"My skin is singed but it heals my heart and with glowing pride I'll wear my scars."
~AFI "Malleus Maleficarum"
:iconcanticum:
:) ah, the wonders of thera-poetry!
Nice job, and hope you feel better ^^

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