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Dance With Me

Can you teach me how to dance  
Show me each step and stance,  
I want to dance with you away  
Into a brighter day,  
Let us waltz across the room  
Just like we're bride and groom,  
Let us dance over the sea  
Across the stars and moonbeams,  
 
Let us sway into the night  
Where we're painted in silver light,  
Let us dance through the fire  
As we make a path of desire,  
Let us sway into the stars
A tango set us free from pain,
And samba brings us through the rain

Let us dance until the end    
Forever I'll hold your hand,    
The only rhythm that we need
Is your steady heart beat,    
The songs of love only we hear    
Tenderly in each others ear,  
And we both know it is true  
As we both whisper, "I love you."
This is a collaboration of words that I wrote with :icondiluculi:
I do hope you enjoy :heart:
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:icondragonlolidk123:
DRAGONlolidk123 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
It's beautiful :')
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:iconfreddycosmo:
FreddyCosmo Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013

The more I read of your poetry the sweeter you appear in my mind's eye and in my heart. 

You are a dear individual.

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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you so very much for your kind words. :iconbeauroseplz:

I do apologize for the late reply. I have recently returned to DA due to some health issues.
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:icondarkfirewings:
DarkFireWings Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very lovely. :-).
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you so very much :)

I do apologize for the later reply. I have recently come back to DA due to some health issues and I am determined to answer all my comments. So please do forgive the lateness.
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:icondarkfirewings:
DarkFireWings Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome. And no problem I hope that your health is better. :)
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Professional Writer
It is getting there slowly. Being here helps and around all my friends. :)
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:icondarkfirewings:
DarkFireWings Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well better to go the slow road, instead of the fast one. Lol. And i found being here and writing helped me as well. I do hope I have the chance to see more of your lovely work. :) 
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you so much. Your kind words me so much to me. I know I read your work and I am really amazed at your talent. :)
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:icondarkfirewings:
DarkFireWings Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww! :) thank you very much. I've been working on a few short pieces. Hopefully soon I'll be able to post them on here. I think I just might have one you'll love ;)
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:iconchryssalis:
chryssalis Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
Totally wonderful,my Angel............:aww::love:
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:iconpatrick2011:
Patrick2011 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
beautiful work my friend:hug::glomp:
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:iconorchid22:
orchid22 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Such lovely writing. I always enjoy your talents :)
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:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Professional Writer
You write beautifully together angel :) :heart:
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:iconancientpoet:
ancientpoet Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Lovely as always
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:iconscatteredashe:
ScatteredAshe Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:love:
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:iconnidhi-rathish:
nidhi-rathish Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Aww such a sweet poem!
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:icondragonschest:
DragonsChest Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Professional Writer
Very lyrical, would be good as a song... :w00t:
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:icondarkallegiance666:
darkallegiance666 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Lovely writing, dear!
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Wonderful collaboration for both of you. Lovely!! :heart:
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:iconsutsuki-sensei:
Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
This is so beautiful!! Why do I ignore such glorious pieces for so long? I am ashamed of myself T^T

This is still an absolutely brilliant and amazing and beautiful piece Angel. it really and truly is.
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
I really do enjoy, it's a simple, true love poem =)
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
Aww...thank you. I love writing with her. Our words flow somehow. :)
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome =)
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:iconsparia:
Sparia Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
this is beautifully written!
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you very much :)
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:iconsparia:
Sparia Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student General Artist
you are most welcome :)
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:iconsilvioricardonelli:
silvioricardonelli Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
dance with you! thank you very much.
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
:aww:..You are most welcome. Thank you for reading it. :)
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:iconsilvioricardonelli:
silvioricardonelli Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
really enjoyed it, really write very well.
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:iconred1699:
red1699 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
a beautiful and heart felt poem. Can so relate to it and imagine this
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
Aww...thank you my friend. I am glad it is something good you can relate to as well as see in your mind. Nothing is as beautiful as two hearts entwined in a dance of love.
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:iconred1699:
red1699 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
yea it is cause I am in love, she is amazing. You are very welcomes
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:iconstefymoondust:
Stefymoondust Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
such a wonderful poem!!!!
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you very much! :)
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bossie-boots Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist
Now that is amazing and very well written i love this one :love:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you Hun. That means so much to me :heart:
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:iconbossie-boots:
bossie-boots Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist
My pleasure hun :love:
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