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Hopes Loss

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Hopes Loss

Silent tears flow from these Angels eyes…
All my hopes and dreams have died,
No more light can filter through,
For thoughts of not being with you..
Gone with the wind, amongst the breeze
Are the dreams I had of you and me..
Leaving a broken heart to cry,
Drowning in my tears of Hopes Loss.

This broken soul cries endlessly,
Feeling the pain of what could be.
Even though I should know better..
These feelings I have inside won't die,
I try to keep them locked in place
But there are times they burst forth.
Demanding to be heard,
Needing to be felt.

I remember the words you spoke that fateful day,
That you and me are impossible in so many ways..
Those words that tore at my heart,
Leaving an ache in its wake.
But it still doesn't change the feelings I have for you,
I long to run and hold you close,
Spilling forth all that I feel for you.
I don't though, swallowing it all back inside.

The dream I've had on so many nights…
Its still oh sweet, but hauntingly so
See I saw the time, I knew the moment.
A vivid movie that played in my mind,
Holding your face gently between my hands,
Looking into your eyes,
Showing you with mine what lay inside.
Then ever so softly I would whisper these three
words to you,
I love you.

Silent tears flow from these Angels eyes…
All my hopes and dreams have died,
No more light can filter through,
For thoughts of not being with you..
Gone with the wind, amongst the breeze
Are the dreams I had of you and me..
Leaving a broken heart to cry,
Drowning in my tears of Hopes Loss.
This poem I had started about a month ago, at the time I couldnt complete. Well tonight I decided to finish it. It's called Hopes Loss :depressed:

Current: I want to thank 007Balel for again editing my poem. Thank you my friend :iconblackheartplz:
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Moonlight-Illusions's avatar
This was beautifully written. :clap:

Though these lines:

'These feelings I have inside won't die,
I try to keep them locked in place
But there are times they burst forth.
Demanding to be heard,
Needing to be felt.'

They touched me on a different level that made me want to sob! Stunning work.