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Love Blossoms


My Sun shines brightly, I can see her smile
I told her it would happen, the right one would come.
Always doubtful, but never was I
I saw it happening right before her eyes,
Then with one blink, he became hers
A seed bloomed, that was planted long ago,
A flower of love, a beautiful rose…
This is a poem for Mouse. We have always said that she was the Sun and I was the Moon. I hope you enjoy this, and yes I knew it would happen for you. :huggle:

This is a challenge for :iconmy-soul-bleeds-ink:
Here is a link to the blog: [link]
This challenge was to create a : Alliterisen.
I hope it came out right.:)
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chryssalis Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
I love it!:love::clap:
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orchid22 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
:rose: so beautiful..I want one too :)
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orchid22 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
A love Blossom I mean...:heart:
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samuelprtt Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
i liked it a lot. Thanks
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Professional Writer
:aww: You are truly welcome. I am so glad you liked it. :)
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samuelprtt Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
i liked it a lot. Thanks
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bossie-boots Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist
Love this hun :love:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you very much Hun :heart:
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bossie-boots Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist
My pleasure hun :love:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Writer
Really lovely...
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you very much :)
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Writer
:iconflowerheart1plz::iconflowerheart2plz:
:iconflowerheart3plz::iconflowerheart4plz::iconwelcome1plz::iconwelcome2plz::iconwelcome3plz::iconwelcome4plz:
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
:love: Aw, it's so pretty!
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Writer
:huggle: Thank you
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
My pleasure :huggle:
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
:blush: This is absolutely beautiful Angel. :tighthug: Thank you for this. ^-^

I'm still sure it'll happen for you too...
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Writer
Aww...you are welcome :blushes:
It was my pleasure. Thank you for being my inspiration. :huggle:
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
^-^ You're welcome Angel. I shall make him read it later on today lol
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Writer
Good, please share it with him. I hope he likes it as well. :)
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Of course. ^-^
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Patrick2011 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
beautiful words my friend :glomp::hug:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you my sweet friend :iconcocoglompplz:
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