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Overcome

I do this...well...when it is needed.
I haven't written in so long
Yet tonight it is needed
For my emotions have been drawn
Like a fountain they pour
All that is inside of me
Silent words never spoken
The tears that are never seen

I am not sure if it will help
I am not sure of much at all
To many emotions
I wish it would stop
I want it all to go away
I wish I truly had wings
Maybe then I would be free
Maybe finding peace and serenity
Yet that is a childish thought
For the world we live in
It will always be a dream...
The poem speaks for itself.

Also this is my second poem for the :iconglory-be-project:
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red1699 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
wow very deep. The words speak to me
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you. This poem might be true for many of us who write.
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red1699 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
very true and you are welcomes
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George551 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
I know people who write like this, I gotta say I envy you, whenever I write like this it looks like a toddler on acid wrote it.

After that little joke, I have to say that this is superb, really really nice, I am sorry I missed this when it first came out, but I am here now!
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
Aww...thank you so very much. You have no idea what your words mean to me. I would still like to see what you have written. Sometimes we are our worst critics, we are harder on ourselves than others would be. :)
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George551 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
Don't mention it comrade, trust me my words aren't good, I only post what passes my tests and even those are hit and miss.
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
I am sure I would still enjoy them. :)
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Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Professional Writer
For some of us 'life'is a cage and the world of dreams our only joy and freedom... :heart: :heart:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
That is so very true. I do wish at times I could stay in my dreams :heart: :heart:
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TheDudettte Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
Wow.. This is brilliant stuff. Explains why people write in the first place. A way to escape from never spoken words..
In love!
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