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Wounded hearts bleed so deep
I grasp bending down on one knee
I up look up at her
With tears in my eyes
Begging and pleading one more time

Please I cry
Remove it from me
I can't handle the pain
So deep within me

Let me feel nothing
Because its all a lie
Love is supposed to be beautiful
Yet instead I cry

Lifting the knife
With shaking hands
Blood dripping from it
Into the sand

Kneeling down next to me
Her eyes open wide
Staring at the fresh scars
Where my heart does be

Shaking her head
She holds me close
Covering the cuts
As I lean in close

Cry little one
She says to me
Pour your heart out
Let the pain free
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Zytn Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
This really explains how a Broken Heart feeels. A feeling I know all to well. This a really good peice and I would love to see more like it if you can recomend any to me.
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Professional Writer
I think I can, my gallery is filled with poems like this.
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Zytn Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
Mine are to a certain extent.
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chryssalis Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Wonderful!!How many times have i said this "please,remove it from me"....:clap:
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orchid22 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
Oh it is true hearts can hurt but the hurt makes the love when it comes more valuable and precious. :heart:
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darkallegiance666 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
Sad - very sad.
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NearlyInvisibleMind Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:rose::rose:BRAVO :rose::rose::clap:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Professional Writer
Powerful poetry...
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Patrick2011 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
:hug:
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
:iconsadhugplz:
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dracoholic13 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student Writer
:tighthug:
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j3ff3rson Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
:heart:
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suzukoyan Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
:iconnewhugplz:
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rawesome1 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Professional General Artist
Beautiful :heart:
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goldshroom Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student Writer
Excellent expression of heartbreak and betrayal. Full marks. :)
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
Wounded hearts bleed so deep
and together it seems... Wonderful piece dear Angel.
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Diluculi Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cry my love, cry
let the tears flow
Instead of the blood
from the wounds below
:tighthug:
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ZaneTheGuardian Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle:
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013   Writer
Pour your heart out, though it hurts,
to hold it in is always worse.
But be careful the vessel you choose,
least you find your trust abused.

pour your heart out, share the pain,
and there will be no need for wounds again.
cry to those who once cried to you;
they are there to help you too.

pour your heart out, don't pretend,
pain is your enemy and not your friend.
Let it out before it's too late,
wounds and death are not your fate.
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AloneintheDark68 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013   Digital Artist
"Shaking her head
She holds me close
Covering the cuts
As I lean in close"

wow!!!! I love that line!!! :love: :worship:
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