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Tears of an Angel


I don’t know how much longer that I can be strong,
This storm is so great, I feel like I am coming undone,
Winds wrapping around me, I can hardly breathe,
The rains breaking me down, tearing at the seams,
Burning eyes I have, that don’t shed a tear,
The weight upon my shoulders, I can no longer bear

What once was strong and impenetrable, these walls of mine,
Are slowly crumbling around me, dust into the ground
No longer able to shield myself, from all that’s going on,
A heart slowly dying inside, no longer filled with joy,
Sadness and sorrow have engulfed my very soul,
Sometimes I truly wish that I wasn’t here anymore.

Wings battered and bruised, fail me as I fall to my knees,
No longer able to glide and fly, enjoying the breeze,
Dreams that were once so real, burning to nothing but ash,
Are blown away with the wind, floating by so fast,
I watch them as they fade, all my hope is gone,
A sad melody fills my ears, as my tears finally fall….

Crying for what was lost so many years ago,
As the tears run down my face,
Crying for the hurt and pain, upon my skin,
All the bruises that no one can see,
Crying for the innocence that was taken from me,
All that is left is my memories and bad dreams,
Crying for the one that I prayed would come,
That hero who would save me from it all,

I wrap my arms around me sitting here alone,
Alone in the dark as always, letting my tears flow…
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:iconchryssalis:
chryssalis Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
So incredibly sad...So amazing....:clap::clap:
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orchid22 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Ah dear you always touch my heart with such emotionally charged words..written from the depth of your soul. Such sad expressions written just beautifully. Sending a huge hug :heart:
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Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Achingly sad beautiful angel... Maybe you should talk to the one you cry for? :huggle: :heart: :heart:
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Tirramirr Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*gives you a long hug and a cookie*
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:iconingodzhandz:
InGodzHandz Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Photographer
Jesus can save you!
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Professional Writer
Very emotional and heartfelt. :wow:
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aalie Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconsadhugplz: You know we are here for you, as you have always been here for us.
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TheDudettte Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Passionate.. Sometimes i wonder if more ppl feel this way than they wanna admit. I love it! <3
A work that inspires.. ( kinda personal for me hihi) :)
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Kay-March Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Deeply emotional, I love it, very much... you make the Angels cry dear.
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Sutsuki-Sensei Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
:( :iconsadhugplz: You are not alone when dealing with all of these things Angel. You know that you are not. Riddle speaks the truth: we will get through this. Somehow we will.

We love you Angel. And we're not about to let you deal with everything alone.
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome!
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you very much. :hug:
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
:tighthug: This almost makes me cry myself...
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
:huggle: I am sorry....
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
It's okay, it just means the emotion is touching =)
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ZaneTheGuardian Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle: stay strong Angel
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
:huggle: Thanks Hun. I shall or try to.
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Forgotten-Reaper Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
:huggle:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
:huggle:
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Patrick2011 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
:saddummy::hug:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
:huggle:
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013   Writer
:hug:
You know you can count on me, and you will get through. I promise - just like you promised me.
:heart:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
:hug:
I know J. I am glad to have you here, believe me when I say that. :heart:
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013   Writer
:hug:
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shad0wbeast Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
:iconsadhug: I'm sorry to hear this...
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
Thanks...
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shad0wbeast Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Writer
it's no problem. Try to feel better.
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
Meh...you know me.
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Diluculi Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconsadhugplz:
we will get through it love! Somehow we will :heart::tighthug:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional Writer
:huggle: We will. Somehow. :tighthug: :heart:
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