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Dying From Love

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Dying From Love


His sweet words touched her heart
Now it is bleeding and torn apart
His gentle touch as he held her hand
Now it is empty as a barren land
His tender kiss across her lips
Ignited something deep within
Now they are parched and dry
Craving moisture that he would provide
He caressed her heart with his love
Now it is screaming from the pain
Dying slowly as she cries in the rain
Love is supposed to be beautiful, yet this same love can rip you apart inside.
Making you want to curl up and die. :iconblackheartplz:
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MagicalJoey's avatar
I didn't comment on this earlier because I couldn't. I actually still can't to a great extent.

This is truth on a plate with no sugar-coating or fancy decorations. Raw power and emotion. I've felt it. I am sure many, many have.

You know what I went through in Jan with Chris. And then in April with Richard. And then in May with Phillip (and the disaster that nearly caused). You know I identify with this 100% and could probably write my own version.

However, sometimes, even if you struggle to believe, a window gets opened and hope is let out of Pandora's Box. If it can happen to this rotten heart, it can happen to your golden one.

:tighthug: